Shadow Knight

At our school, things like trashcans get burnt ever now and then, it's no big deal really. Anyway, nice story, don't think i found any mistakes. Good Job ~~Shadow~Knight~~ :twisted: ...

If i interpreted the message in this poem correctly, i would have to agree. The earth's time is running out, and it's all thanks to human's, isn't it niced to ...

I followed all of that, a bit hard, but i managed. Ok, that was wierd. One question, were did you get the inspiration for that? *Stares into a mirror and ...

Well, it's good apart from the paragraphs, actually, i thought the version you sent me had better paragraphs, anyway, i hope you figure out what to write next! ~~Shadow~Knight~~ :twisted: ...

It was probably that you inserted them by accident, and i didn't realise. lol ~~Shadow~Knight~~ :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:

Heh, it's a good story, i look forward to more, and just to put you at ease hunter, i'm not confused, i don't see any places where anyone could be ...

It's a great story, i found the Kwu... a bit hard to picture, other than that, i think you should slow down the story a bit, i found it a ...

Great chapter. But..... i found it slightly predictable (the King and Queen adopting). Other than that its great, once again, i emphasise, remember to put closing "'s ~~Shadow~Knight~~ :twisted: :twis

IS this story supposed to be funny, or a horror? well, it certainly made me laugh :D :lol: ok, well, er, what exactly is egggg supposed to sound like, just ...